Industrial attempt 1

Did want to try something out of my comfort zone and even did a little bit of research on this type of design theme. This was my first try but I'm going try again:) I'd love any suggestions or corrections for improvement. Thank you

Did want to try something out of my comfort zone and even did a little bit of research on this type of design theme. This was my first try but I'm going try again:) I'd love any suggestions or corrections for improvement. Thank you